Wednesday, March 17, 2010

THE TOY

I went to the big,old and dirty toy shop.I Stepped onto the grassy mat. I couldn't wait to look inside, but all it was was rusty, old and ruined toys. I went to the $2 bin. I found a dark, black and scary knob. It had little, spiky and short things on the side. I threw it in the air. It turned into a robot. I was frightened. I found a button but it went away. It turned back into a knob. i bought it but only used it a few times.













































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































Thursday, March 11, 2010

Sentence of three

Last week Mr Parry taught us how to use a sentence of three. I used it all day.
First I went into the old, brown and dirty carpet in room 5. I went to my brown, wooden and messy desk . I opened it. I put in my red, shiny and clean writing book . I put my green,camo and good pencil in my desk. I could not stop using a sentence of three.

The old fashioned toy shop

Mr Parry told us to use a sentence of three. I decided to use it for a whole day. Me and Olivia went to town and we went to an old fashioned toy shop and we bought a new, yellow and bouncing ball. It was very, very , very, very bouncy. It was very round and cool. It could bounce
up, up, out into space and if you bounce it right, it comes back to you. If you
bounce it wrong it does not come back to you ever.
We bought something else. It was as thin as the thinest tree in the world and has a big wing and that big wing goes on both sides. It is a plane and it is a real one. It can carry 1000 people in a flight because there are 100 seats. We got something else and it is some lego. A big, yellow and fast truck. It has 10 000 pieces and it is as big as our classroom.

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

New Car

In the weekend my dad bought us a new seven seater. I sat in the new, warm back seat.
We were on our way to school. When we got to school we went in my new, colourful and full of work classroom. When the bell went we all ran to the tattered, old and brown mat. Mr Parry called the roll.

Toy world

In the car I asked Mum If we were at old, loaded and fun Toy World. I was wearing red, new and cool clothes.
Soon we were at tall, shaking and toy filled Toy World. I thought it was called Toy World because it was fill of strange looking, shiny and fun old toys.
It was summer time, suddenly Bang! Wallop! Toys with blue, red and yellow crashed. Oh the old, ripped and red carpet was broken. I tried to think about something else but all I could think about was the mighty, big and tumbling crash.
Soon I found a green, orange and black toy train.
I raced out of the tall, solid and brick Toy World.

Tuesday, March 2, 2010

The Dinosaur

One day a small and fat dinosaur climbed up the school pipe. He had just finished his excersise. Then he caught Alex.
" Grrr" went the dinosaur.
Alex turned and fled fast.